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Servant of Shadows II

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Azure windows to her sensual soul,

alluring lips maturing lustfully

Setting virtue aside, she’s in control,

with her visual view she inhales me.

 

Tilting backwards, she calls me with a stare,

as mistress rings for faithful expectance

My knees bending slowly, a match unfair,

I begin to bow for her acceptance.

 

Her arms stretch forth in flawless victory,

thirsting for a drip of facile passions.

Like a river of whip rushes softly,

fascinating my facet reactions.

 

Through my willingness, I bring forth pleasure,

In pitch shadows, by design I endure.

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For group of Passions Lair. "In Sonnet Form."

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  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 20
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    Words worthy of such passion and inner elations. Great write.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 20

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    This had me in a trance...I am actually intoxicated by your words...as always

    great to see your HOT side...and this is it.

    Good luck

    Mistress Passions


  • Angelflower
    February 20

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    well good lord! lets not hold back huh? Lol. this was very sensual and just.. *pants* beautiful .. you did a wonderful job. I'm sure that she will love it! best of luck in the contest baby boy..

    Angel


  • Introvert2006
    February 20
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    Steamy! Well Done Poet!


  • poetryrocksmysox
    February 20

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    Filled With Passion,

    ...and a big Wow for the readers! < Made me smile, that's for sure. I wish I could express half of what I really feel, let alone be as gifted as your poetic weavings are... You amaze me, and amaze me anew each time I read you! This is pure Gold in my book, and I wish you all the best. Though you surely don't need any well wishes for this poetic kiss! I love your erotic ways, make me melt. Sighs.

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