Soft rains of gamma ions
Pool in a breath-taking glow
Pervading the doors and windows
Of the welcoming house
And in the home
A picturesque scene of the family
Together forever
So poignant, it's burned into memory
A household standing alone in placid perfection
Author notes
"There Will Come Soft Rains" by Ray Bradbury.
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Impressed by the depths hidden in this one. A picture prompt that inspired scientific descriptive, artistic inspiration, and spiritual depth. I also like the last two word phrase. Placid perfection describing it's ability to be perceived as perfect in abslolute stillness having done nothing to actually "earn" that distinction. Great job.
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