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Who Knows Where the Heart Is~

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Who knows where the heart is
It wanders randomly
It connects with beauty
It seeks tranquility

Who knows were the heart is
In a given moment
It lingers on sunrise
It dwells in the sunset

Who knows where the heart is
Capturing sweet glances
Or with Spring’s daffodils
Or in fluttering leaves

Who knows where the heart is
With sparrows in dust baths
With giggling children
On paths in La Verna

Who knows where the heart is
As it flits and flutters
In the beauty of life
With spontaneity

Who know where the heart is
In tender moments
When it is so aching
That it might break in two

Who knows where the heart is
When it is elated
Bursting from happiness
We know, oh yes, we do

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Thank God for hearts!

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  • Aww

    I really like it. It's beautiful and powerful. I, like many others who have read this poem, am still wandering where my heart is, but i think we've foun yours - you've so delicately and beautifully woven it into your words.
    Very eye-catching title
    Keep writing thanks for sharing


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 20
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    Absolutely stunning. Who truly knows where the heart is?!? Great thought provoking words.


  • HaleyMary
    February 20

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    Beautiful write. I find I am still searching for my heart some days, who knows where it is, but you seem to have found your heart and worked it into the poem well. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.

    Haley Mary


  • Dead creature
    February 20

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    Beautiful strong
    words, your poem is
    great

    I do not know where
    the heart is but
    it has it in your writing.

    WELL DONE


  • Denerica
    February 20
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    Heart so beautiful as this sings out all the beauty and imagery, well written. Blessings.

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