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A Final Kiss Composed

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His violin wept the tears
hid behind eyes discreet,
danced across her heart
silken strings for feet,
embraced the final note
the last petal of a rose,
"She loves me not"
a final kiss composed

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  • kdom
    March 4, 2009
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    This is beautiful.


  • Danna Hobart
    March 2, 2009
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    Sad. Thank you for entering.


  • Kuranya gold member
    February 22, 2009

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    This is wonderful, the rhyme was so sutble and perfect. A wonderful entry. Best to you in the contest


  • crimsondew
    February 20, 2009
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    Full of feelings and imagery..good write!