His violin wept the tears
hid behind eyes discreet,
danced across her heart
silken strings for feet,
embraced the final note
the last petal of a rose,
"She loves me not"
a final kiss composed
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #55 by AutumnGypsy.
700 points, ended February 22, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Concert (prewrites welcome) by Danna Hobart.
400 points, ended March 2, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is beautiful.
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Sad. Thank you for entering.
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This is wonderful, the rhyme was so sutble and perfect. A wonderful entry. Best to you in the contest
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Full of feelings and imagery..good write!
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