They tell me to move on,
And it will go away,
they tell me just to smile,
And all will be ok.
They tell me to be happy,
To stop acting so sad,
They tell me not to worry,
And stop driving them mad.
they tell me it is fine,
But the dont know what's in my head,
They tell me all this crap,
But i just wish i was dead.
They tell me to talk,
To get it all out,
Yet the minute I do,
On their face they show doubt.
They tell me this shit,
That i dont want to hear,
Yet if they opened their eyes,
They could see all the fear.
So when they open their mouths,
And think that they know,
How about they listen,
And I'll tell them the feelings i cant show.
Author notes
Yer all my stupid parents keep doin is telling me im this and that, and that i need to stop being so pathetic...well if they wernt causing half my problems maybe i could! but yer anyway, this is rubbish yet again, just needed to get it out
I hope this doesnt trigger anything for any one. Please leave me a comment, good, bad, what ever you feel. Just please be a little sensative as they are all true stories about my life so far x
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I will have to say that it is far far far from rubbish its true its honesty something this world knows nothing of and I can so relate to every line in this poem!!! I love it its beyond words so all I will say is BEAUTIFUL!!!
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this is far from rubbish but sure saying that plays into the poem nicely. sounds like a hardcore punk song to me!
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Wow I relate SO much! You got out the frustration and pain well here x x
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Heartfelt!
sorry for how you feel, but it is such a fantastic poem! luckily i dont suffer what you do, but i have a friend that does. look her up, shes knows how you really feel, down to the last detail. diverfoxykaz. hope you felt better letting this off ur chest x -
The saddest part is that so many can relate to this poem.
People don't understand that this isn't just the 'blues' but rather a chemical imbalance in your head that you can't get rid or or create at your will. They supposedly want to help but the moment you open up, they lash back at you with doubts and "Snap out of it" shit. -
This is really rather good. Good meter and good rhyme which has not be forced (often we see rhyme that has been "shoe-horned" into place!) you DO have the knack for poetry...do, indeed, keep it going!!
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I can definately relate to this poem. People used to and some still say the same things to me. Great job. Keep it up.
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I can really relate, I have this happen to me all the time!
It's not your fault remember. I know i can't help it, I don't even know wuts going on half of the time.
ok im not making sence now
but great job, and glad you can express this
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I don't think this is rubbish, it's really good and I can sooo relate after tonight... my cousin told me basically to get over stuff and myself because I'm choosing to be this way... she thinks I'm just feeling sorry for myself but it's not the case, I don't know what to do and can't help how I feel and nobody has got a right to tell me to just 'get over it' like it's that easy. Same with you. Nobody but you knows how you're feeling. Ignore what they say and concentrate on helping yourself and trying to get better. It's a really emotional and beautiful poem =]
Love you <3
x x x
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Thats what my parents tell me
that i need to get over
shit but i dont get
how cuz iv hung on to it
for a while
so how am i suposed
to let it go>>>????
Well this was really good!
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I think we have the same parents. I wish you could get out of that blasted house
You're such a beautiful person with so much to offer the world. This is a powerul piece. Such talent you have! Keep writing!!! 
sssss
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Another intanse, power packed write. You have such a way of expressing that I don't think I've seen anywhere else. Even in teens going through the things you've mentioned, the train of thought isn't this... powerful. I know about annoying parents -who doesn't?- but I really do hope that yours know that they have one very gifted writer for a son.
God Bless You,
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*hugs*
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Whoever "they" is [your parents?] "they" need to stop telling you that shit, you are an amazing person from what I've gathered from talking to you. "They" need to realize that what you're going through isn't easy, and you can't just smile and be happy. Great poem love <3
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i know how this feels, people can be such disgusting hypocrites sometimes. i'm so sorry you have to go through this, i wish i could help somehow
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Wow if you think that was bad im scared to see wat you think is good. It would prolly kill me. This piece blew me away. And if you need someone to talk to im here
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