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In My Youth ~Butterfly~




Peeled of your heart,
you had colorful wings
 
I loved you…then
but my net,
              couldn’t catch you



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  • Naughtygrlred
    February 20

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    Maybe you just need a bigger net! I really like the way you write. Sweet, simple and expressive. I hope you bring in the gold!


    • Malabu
      February 20
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      it was someoone i had crush on...
      but could never have
      ohh hummm


  • suseann
    February 20

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    Serendipitous versed look into this author's past of fond memories.
    Isn't it wonderful to realize a butterfly in it's beauty and fragility
    In nature. Is much like love it's self? A magnificent thing of beauty.
    But if held too tight,or overly controlled .
    We loose it forever,a death brought on in admiring it and
    attempting to possess it.

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