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To Trust Again

To Trust Again

I gave my all so long ago.
I was repaid in pain.
I've nothing left inside me now
To learn to trust again.

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  • karma-n-peace
    February 26
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    The length of this write may be short but the meaning and impact long.
    Great Write.


  • DeeDee
    February 23

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    Touched me!

    This one with 4 short lines, said more than most 40 line poems on trust, pain & heartache! Beautifully Heartbreaking!


  • going nowhere
    February 20

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    awww... this was so filled with sadness, as if there is no hope to hold on to. to trust someone and then to be so hurt, well... it is hard to trust again so fully, but i hope that there can be a way to trust slowly again. thank you


    • LarryATilander
      February 20
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      I would hope too,

      but there's nothing to build hope on. Maybe someday...... Cheers.

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