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Winter Blues to Springing Hopes

Frozen white lakes
Thick snow-covered deep woods
Ice-rimmed shores
are the scenes
that feast your eyes!

Prolonged dampness
Plants a kind of fear
In our heart as well

Shortest days ready
People to stay
Longer freezing nights


The story of shivers
Is gone a little
We are on the equinox
Bidding adieu to the icy days

Short days of winter
Rapidly grow longer

Adding special smell to the soil
Grey trees, plants melt tears
Happy are they, now turning green

Marching  self-effacingly
Miss Spring smiles a bit
Lilacs blossom everywhere
Yellow dandelions cover the roadsides
Budding of the apple leaves
Produce pinky-white flowers

Lovely lovely scence
Like a modern art
Grabs our little heart

Winters come, never stay
Worry ever not
Springs come to bring hope!

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  • LoveLikePoetry
    February 20
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    The beginning was alright, but the rest was absolutely amazing. Thanks for entering!