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From Mother's Womb...!

The winged gateway
Opened for the little angel

White feathered fairy
Nursed him with care

Author notes

Prompt : Picture by Anna Ignazieva

I don't understand why this picture makes me think about the birth of a child... may be, being a mother to be, my dream about child birth goes with this picture... I am sure my child will be visiting this world as lovely as this picture portrays...

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 20
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    how beautiful... x


  • crimsondew
    February 20
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    I am sure your child will be here soon...A well written poem nevertheless..

    All the best!


  • LadyLavender gold member
    February 20
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    beautifully written.

  • StarGrrl
    February 20

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    Good write. Even though it's a very different take on the poem, it was well written and thats what counts. The idea of the child being a puppet does make sense because children are very much like puppets until they get older. They need to be directed and mothers teach them those directions until they learn. Good luck in the contest.