Your fingers caress my breasts
spiraling
sensual sensations
electrify turgid peaks
you stroke your nimble tongue
copiously savoring nectar
dew drops upon my nipples
passion soars ~ and weeps from pores
saline droplets
moisten sensitive skin
as your body
slithers against mine
I feel your ridged rod pressing petals
You invade me
trembling
I stretch as you expand
filling my embracing sheath
pulsing bodies
find a rhythm
senses soar,
fervor roars
nails rake crimson furrows
Knees…
(do I still have them?)
give
as your body plunders mine
Again… you demand as you feed the fire
waves crash
time explodes
I’m lost
Found
Shooting stars spark across my vision
as you wring rapture from my quivering thighs
Lips ~ capture ~ lips
you inhale my fevered breath
confine my essence with your sigh
you conquer me
and I sing out in triumph
Patricia Gibson-Little
February 23, 2004
Author notes
For Joe... as always.
Written February 23rd, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Sex by ninetnine.
300 points, ended March 13, 2004, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Well done!
The poem is very well paced. The spiritual connection of the lovers is acknowledged, which isn't always done well in erotica. Best of all, it was successful erotica without being pornographic.
-Colin -
mercy!
where's that cold shower?
I one after reading this!
LOL
I did enjoy this tremedously!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill -
I think this is the best and least trashy erotica poem I have ever read. It's beautiful. It doesn't sound like a trashy romance novel. Great write!
Elle
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this is erotica, this is art... i like the way you put things in order... not lustful... i can even sense the love in it... this is love-making...
LUCKY JOE... lol
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excellent
Lovely piece, it reminds me of the last night I had with my goddaughter's mom before we parted ways. Damn I wish we were still together. Oh well, I'll find my "Mrs. Right" at one point or another. Once again, Lovely Piece. Keep up the good work!!! -
it's very... gentle. different from the porn poetry i write. but this was sensual and erotic in all the right places. very nicely composed.
Nyx... -
Tasteful erotica is always some of the best. I loved your word choicage (wow, I made up a word! ) I hope you do well in this contest!
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I... Am.. Impressed..
Must I say.. Damn! That was beautifully written and it wasn't. Dirty.. It was like an art.. Beautifully done... -
Very beautiful. Senuous without being graphic. This was such a nice and tnder read. my favorite part was:
"Lips ~ capture ~ lips
you inhale my fevered breath
confine my essence with your sigh"
There is nothing as intimate as a kiss.
Keep writing.
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