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The Dove

Filthy bird, away! I said,
before I ended, starting to fed

a Week ago, there were three,
now, it seems, a feeding spree

The swarm descent on me,
there was this one, where is he?

Old scar, perhaps a broken wing
so old he croak & cannot sing

I think I'm in Love
with a disease, infested dove

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  • Kathraina silver member
    February 20

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    Haha, great take on the prompt!
    Me and a friend were talking about "pigeons" when I came up with this quote
    Bravo!
    Thank you for entering and good luck

    ♥ Kate