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Passion's Fatal Promise

"Come to me, my child
let me give you everything
that you could ever dream
Your skin like ivory to the touch
flows like sand on calm Summer's day
velvety soft, roses full bloom
You are mine child, let me take you"


Over and over the thoughts roll
through my head screaming
begging to let them take me away
maybe for once, I will comply

Waves brush up against my skin
caressing, touching, sliding,
smoothing in evanescence
as hundreds of fingers glide
over, under and around
covered in stars, shining bright
dancing through glistening skin

Raging waves build inside
as storms cannot be contained
cries and moans of silken pleasure
as the voice rides on in Siren's song

 

"Come to me, my child
let me give you everything
that you could ever dream
Your skin like ivory to the touch
flows like sand on calm Summer's day
velvety soft, roses full bloom
You are mine child, let me take you

...forever"

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Comments

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  • Ken-Maverick
    February 22, 2009

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    Sensually sensual!!
    I was going to write on this picture aswell but went with the other instead.
    Such a tender write, well done
    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    February 20, 2009

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    wow

    really love the art for this great job good lick in the contest keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice dday


  • Tom The Invader
    February 20, 2009

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    This is truely sex from a woman's point of view, as close to it as us guys ever will. This is almost greekeshly epic. Well done baby I love you!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 20, 2009

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    Wonderfully penned with a great take on the prompt.
    Best wishes to you poet.


    Passions


  • hearts blossoms
    February 20, 2009

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    what a brilliant write here, you gave an exquisite story for the pic, sultry and seductive
    abigail


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 20, 2009
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    Yes interesting.

    heh


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    February 20, 2009

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    Great job with this prompt here!
    I love the imagery and thought you
    put into this. Well done and good luck!




    Jeremy0826

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