1.
this field we walk is shit is shit
you think we bite and bite or eat;
a hit we take this joint this joint
disjointed here we picnic high.
2.
caves deep and dark not lovely
remember her: the cocked head
lover sleeping past the sun we left;
she pries herself wetly from a dream.
3.
room 7am is all cunt and cock we
forget to wake and stay here
the half moon of bodies curved to
each other like water at the cusp
of breaking.
4.
tonight: i drink too much pass out
eyes opened to the ceiling as if
dreams drip drop drip from jagged
stone our movement keeps it from
healing.
A contest entry
- COME ON YOU KNOW YOU WANNA CLICK IT. by Xxnightmare21xx.
625 points, ended March 2, 24 entries
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Ok, thank you for entering my contest. now i get that your poem is ment to be 4 perspectives on love, but maybe you could go into a little more detail. Its a good poem. Thank you for entering
Your Judge,
kaycee
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