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Hot Pink

All night long,
I thought about you.
I'm even dreaming while awake
lost to hot pink thoughts of you.
No matter where to go,
no matter how near or how far,
I can't stop hearing the beat of your heart.
I can picture us together,
in a field of hot pink irises.
I can feel the heat and the power of our passion.
As you take me into your arms,
the world fades around us,
and I'm lost to the taste of your sweet lips.
My fever for you is burning me up inside.
I can see us...... YOU AND I.
As night falls,
so cold and dark,
I'll be thinking of you again.
I'd drive all night to reach you.
And when I'd found you at last,
I'd creep into your room and make love to you.
nothing can cool this heat I have for you.
Nothing you can say or do will make these hot pink fantasies fade.

i really felt this

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 22, 2009

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    A wonderful piece penned from you here and I had a pleasure reading! keep penning hon


  • Kristin103161
    February 20, 2009
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    Awesome!!!

    You captured me from the beginning and held me to the end! You also have a gift!

    Kristin


    • abybaby
      February 20, 2009
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      tnx dear....i will have many more coming ur way......hope u will like them all....