She laid back
on the cold leather couch
he seem surprised
by the blind fold
"I don't want to see you",
"I want to pretend your a stranger"
She giggled
blindfolded and full of zeal
"Tell me what you want"
he says in his deep voice
She lays back
and says "do what you may"
he climbs upon her
spreading her legs
caressing her inner thigh
with his lips and lavish tongue
She lays there
slightly moving
while he begins to
move her pussy lips apart
He rubs her clit
with his thumb
making sure
she will cum
his tongue
between her thighs
she starts pant
as her wetness leaks out
still she can not see
he adjusts her
so she is on her belly
between her bottocks
is his pleasure
her pleasure was first
he spits on his cock
lifts her ass up and apart
slowly he works his way in
she moans with pleasure
he smacks her ass
"Faster" she says
as he grips her hips
her lower legs wrap his legs
she clenches the couch
she start to move with him
shaking her ass
he is repetitive in and out
fast and hard
he begins to cum
slow and hard
she yells "give it to me"
"Cum all over me"
Author notes
picture prompt 3...
A contest entry
- Picture Prompts + A BG= 4 Choices to ignite your Muse..Adult 18+ by PassionsPromise.
1050 points, ended February 23, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very hot I loved it. It has been a while I hope you are doing well. I enjoyed this poem. I have wanted to tie someone up and be tied. This had me very hot. The flow was great SH
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I love the scene you ignited.
Ah, this is a testament to the power of erotica at the hands of a skilled poet. I do think you should consider writing erotic novels. They're some of the most commonly published. My wife reads quite a few of them.
Don
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what happens next????
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how delightfully erotic! did you purposely make the lines 69 too lol
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the nastiest...
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oh i am sure she is...if ya only knew
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mm mm mm
what more can be said??? giggles
awesome write, turned me on!
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I knoew that this is my second comment on this work of erotic art, but YOU ARE REALLY GOOD don't let anyone tell u otherwise.
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well thank you I am considering taking some writing classes, maybe i will start writing erotic novels or something...one day right!
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mmmmmmmmmmm my kind of woman, love your mind.. mmmmmmmmm
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that had to have been the best sex ever...great write i FUKIN LOVED it
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This made me laugh for some reason.
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oh ya
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WOW
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damn! i want some tooooooooooo....
yow
mal
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omg ... (gulp) i felt as if i was there !
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Wonderfully hot write here!
Thanks a lot for entering our contest
and good luck to you with it! We
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thank you jeremy
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You are very welcome, take care!
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Damn, this is Hot--well written.
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her poetry is hot.
this spoke loud and clear.
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"Cum all over me"
NOW, that is a phrase that I love hearing said when I'm in bed or wherever with a woman as sweet, as sensual, and as frisky as you! HE! HE! And a phrase that I have also shouted myself on a number of occasions! LOL!!! GOOD LUCK in this contest with this juicy piece, Baby!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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wonderfully penned.
Thanks for sharing such a HOT ASS piece.
Good luck to you
Passions
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Thank you...I am glad you liked it.
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You need to expand on your poetry to full length stories for Storywrite, they are practically there already. You really have a powerful way with erotica.
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Thank you.
really...I dunno i like to keep it short and sweet. But maybe i could write a full length naughty story I would have to work on it and it would take time. Like the romance novel writers. I don't think I write romance! I write naughty hahahah! I will try it though.
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hi
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oh i don't know about that i dont meet people from off the net, too scary
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Oh ya baby!
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Nice write!
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The imagery was so vivid!!! damn, this is a hot one.
I chose this picture aswell
All the best to you in the contest
Ken
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This is naughty my fiery friend
An intense picture of erotic mischief dancing desire allover the senses
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This is fucking good.
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Sex with a stranger is usually fascinating.
One of my girlfriends tells me some girls spit on their partner's pussies before eating her. Now this one here (He spits onhis cock) is a new thing, and all new things are interesting.
The erotica is very well writte, If your purpose is to make the reader wet, you did succeed in doing so.
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i have seen the spitting on the cock..kind of odd lol. kind of different..yea
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ya my mind if full of naughty new things, I don't get it or where it comes from but it's there. I dont know how it got put htere but my creative mind if naughty... hahahah!
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