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Moonlight

I danced within the moonlight
Hoping to join it
Wishing my soul would slip away
And become one with the cool light

I would slide and move
Sway this way and that
Blowing with the wind
Forever across the world

That I could disperse
Into a thousand pieces
Floating on the currents
And simply be

Everywhere

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    March 28

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    i often wish for this very thing...

    such a beautiful entry Ashley


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  • Grunts Girl gold member
    February 21
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    like looking at the reflection of stars on the oceans skin
    lovely write


  • Catz95
    February 20
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    Absolutely beautiful, you always impress me. <3