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Black - An Achromatic

He eats
  all frequencies of light
    neither emits
        nor reflects them

but stores secretly
  at an enigmatic place of
          nothing

A contest entry

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  • teen poeticsoul
    February 20
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    Amazing write,

    very deserving of gold!


  • LadyLavender gold member
    February 20
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    Wow...awesome! Congrats on the GOLD!


  • Harrisham Minhas
    February 20
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    Well-crafted.
    Congrats on the Gold.




  • MoonLight Poet
    February 20

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    with very simple words and strong imagaries, this poems reads good. I guess u created this one to enter a contest... may god bless you...
    Hugs and Kisses
    MLP


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 20
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    How incredibly intriguing... x


  • badnovocaine
    February 20

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    You described this color perfectly!! Just speechless, its really amazing what one could do with words, how you can spin and twist them like a puzzle.
    Loved this actually. Good luck in the contest.

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