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Ready To Blow

I make mistakes
I'm not perfect
I'm out of control
hard to handle
can't accept this?
get the hell
away from me then
I am honest
I am open
I am cold
I am hurting
don't like this?
then get your fake
ass out of my business
I am up front
I'll get to the point
I don't like games
but if you play a game
with me know that I play better
you tell me I am worthless
I am nothing
and just watch where I go
I am at the edge
I am ready to blow
I know I piss you off
deal with it
can't take me at my worst
then you sure as hell
don't deserve me at my best
I self destruct
I hold onto the past
I see mostly what is bad
in people and I don't like
giving second chances
wanna know more?
whether you like it or not
my voice will be heard

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