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Gr(een)owan means to grow

Representing prosperity,
  the third ray of
  creative intelligence
    reflects Nature’s
          invincible beauty
           
but

Paradoxically
embodies envy, sickness and evil too

Author notes

"O, beware, my lord, of jealousy!...... ''

- Othello, William Shakespeare

A contest entry

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  • MoonLight Poet
    February 20

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    Paradoxically good and clear. A coin has two sides and every word will have two different meaning. Like good and bad. How we use it in the context matters here. This poem about green color is very well written


  • DancingShadowCorpse
    February 20

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    AWESOME!

    Very nicely written, I loved it word for word! It's incredible how intelligent someone can be with just a few words! Fantastic write, I hope this one wins! Green is an awesome color and definately a favorite of mine.

    I am 'growan' with envy, you write very well!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 20
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    This is truly creative but you must put the colour in your title... x


    • Kiddy
      February 20
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      just wanted to use the Old English term of Green - growan.. I didn't realize that it will not work out...I would edit the title, and It's not a problem if the edit is not consider for judgement... thanks LB....

      Kiddy