Ocean waves ebbing softly
natures moon lit shore splashed,
I heard the song in his heart.
Music cascading without words
in silent opus; swept me away
dancing in his gentle embrace.
Fragance of tropical gales
breezing in rhythmic love;
hips swayed in passion we
tango-ed under midnight sun.
N'ver removing one garment
Luna winked then sparkled
in his eyes; radiating heat
blazing fire kisses o'er sepia
thighs.
He moaned just like me!
On this island memories born
unforgettable; when he smiled
an forevermore promise then
held me tighter.
He whisperd, I sung in harmony
his song: Just With Me
Author notes
Sultry moments between two people lost in lust & moon light.....
prompt: picture inspired
artist: unknown
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Angelflower.
700 points, ended March 6, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was beautiful!! you really did such a wonderful job!! I loved it!!! bravo!!!!
thank you very much for your beautiful entry, best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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Outstanding poetry
Excellent take on the prompt...Beatifully expressed, stirring, full of imageries..."Luna winked..." Awesome moon imagery.
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this has a magical quality to it and a gentleness that holds them and all of their fiery passion. It is as if, just for a sec, they are vulnerable to the viewer and need to be touched tenderly and honored for being so brave in their adventure and yet full of grace. Beautiful
Love,
Tom B. -
Outstanding....If you were inspired by the picture here..I'm impressed...my working process doesn't go that route and I'm always intrigued by people who have that ability to express themselves creatively in a way that leaves me envious
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AS GOOD AS GOLD - IF YOU ASK ME!
GOOD LUCK in the contest with this sweet, sultry, sensual, romantic, and heartfelt piece, Baby! Your beautiful words fit the picture to a T if you ask me! And damn those are a hot pair of killer legs - in my expert opinion and the rest of that female dancer is just as fine from what I was able to see! HE! HE!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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'I heard the song in his heart'
It just doesn't get any better
than this. I knew you'd right something
amazing but once again you exceed
my expectations.
This is just beautiful
written with a passion
that is felt in every word.
Sigh...
I adore this
Thank you for sharing
and good luck in the contest!
~Pastel
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Gorgeous pic, message me
when the write is up
I know it's gonna be great!
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