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The feast, the fear and the fungi

An edible little-boy
With fragile button-cap
Fleshy short stem
Born on paddy-straw

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Even mighty Caesar
Feared if he was fatal

Author notes

Mushrooms - I used to wonder at this short-lived fruiting bodies for their peculiar nature... the gills, cap, stem and their life make me think where do they come from overnight...where do they go vanished overnight... I am, in here, talking about only the edible mushrooms and not the fatal ones... one more thing I wondered at is the widest classification of mushroom... GOD, I want one more brain to remember and understand all those come in the list...

The story about Caesar, who had a food taster to taste mushrooms before he tastes just to make sure that they are not fatal, interested me a lot and Just wanted to pen something on that story...
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  • Intriguing and unique piece. Delectable mushrooms are they not? Great piece.


  • toomysterious
    March 28
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    A short but interesting piece of poetry. They are a fascinating edible.


  • Arjita gupta
    March 27
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    short and sweet but it still has a whole story behind it.nice art of writing ...lolzzzz!


  • trekkergirl
    March 25

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    wow this is nice. I liked the idea that created it. Most people of that time period had food tasters. That was because a lot of them were poisoned by various people who wanted their power. Good write.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 20
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    How immensely grasping. A story told in poetic stature and poise. well thought out... x


  • MoonLight Poet
    February 20

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    The title itself is very interesting. As if I am going to read a poem about biological science, I prepared my mind. Very interesting. Keep penning, sissy.

    MLP

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