Looted,
forty thieves promenade
satchels
filled covering knees
rogues
sipping morning's dew
alchemist
gathering from buds
disappearing
bandits among daisies
Author notes
Prompt: write in colour
A contest entry
- write in colour by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended February 20, 2009, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is..poetry!
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Beautiful write
Lovely few words
told to the soul of who's listening.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Best
Love Peace
campanaro
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although i didnt completly understand this poem the words were all very beautiful
"rogues
sipping morning's dew"
loved this line.. good write..
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I am amazed by the colorful work presented in this my friend. THANKS for writing another fine poem!
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so creatively engaging ~ such intense description for this colour ~ well thought out!.. x
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