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Rosy (rictameter)


Rosy
satin silky
softy natural frosts
with colored hues of sweet fragrance
dew my petal mind in caressing touch
like motherly breast feed pleasure
in dawns of ozone froths
and I become
Rosy

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Manoj Sanyal

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  • Amera gold member
    March 29

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    Perfect in form and syllable count. The image of a rose is beautiful and this poem does it justice.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • bw43
    March 6
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    pretty