Parachutes, butterflies and daisies on a bad haircut day,
reminded me of spring, back in the day
hay-fever assaulted my nose
as I lay in daisies, wearing spring clothes
Eyes leering at the sky,
I soon fell asleep, as clouds rolled by
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Prompt: Picture Prompt (25-50 words)
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A contest entry
- Delightful Evening Quickie by delightfulmess.
550 points, ended February 19, 2009, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ooh! This is just lovely. Your words are amazing! I love this!
Love,
Ylova
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excellent
hey, this is awesome-pretty picture- absolutely delightfull- wonderfully played words which leave the heart sighing happily-
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Great flow and feeling here... Very nice piece to go along with the prompt - unique and well penned take here. Well done!
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i love it
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oops...here they are:
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LOL... Beautiful and little funny. *giggle*
thank you for entering :f:f
*hug*
Delila
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wonderful take on the prompt. good luck.
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Beautiful imagery and thoughts here.
Good luck to you and it's great to read
you again! Take care!
Jeremy0826
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