Pinefrost
breath
the place
where rainbow
ribbons crash.
crystalline
forest.
A contest entry
- Quickie Now #19 by amaranthine lover.
400 points, ended February 25, 2009, 8 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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pretty imagery. since this is like my first comment since i "came back" i feel like i need to say something smart and profound, but actually this is quite short, and beautifully penned, (cliche eh)? I had pizza for lunch, it was nasty and i just burped and it tasted like pizza. *Re-reads comnent* in my ranting of fear of having not enough to say, I actually have had enough to say :-D I rock.
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beautiful imagery here!
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Great:
Very poetic.
I like the abstract beginning. And the ending is also abstract.
I love this, but could you explain this poem for me?
Thanks.
--- Evemauy
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well i was limited for words due to the contest prompt, but basically it's describig the aurora borealis in the north, pinefrost was combined into one word due to the word limits i first mentioned, pines and frost being prominent components of the cold north, rainbow ribbons is the descriptor for the actual aurora, thanks alot for the read tho!
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This could have gone on and on..
The word choice is stark and imagery is well done, I could almost smell the woods...
Shari
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pretty imagery. since this is like my first comment since i "came back" i feel like i need to say something smart and profound, but actually this is quite short, and beautifully penned, (cliche eh)? I had pizza for lunch, it was nasty and i just burped and it tasted like pizza. *Re-reads comnent* in my ranting of fear of having not enough to say, I actually have had enough to say :-D I rock.
always
mylee -
Oooh, this reminds me of Snow covered forests in America. (??? I know...) Love this, a nice little 'quickie'. Keep it up, poet.
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huh.. for some reason I could feel a rhythm to this little write
I really liked this.. best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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