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this prayer

how does she know
that i don't hurt
how does he know
that i don't cry
how do they know
that i don't live
because i'm not me
is it that obvious
that i don't belong
the outcast
the nobody
the invisible
that's me
not heard
all i do - to no avail
i fall short
God
why?
this is not fair!
i fought too
i died too
i hurt
and no one sees
no one cares
-still you say you do
you say you hear
you say you're here
you want me
but i thought that's what i gave
now i'm not so sure
somewhere along the way
i took me back
i'm sorry
forgive me
help me to stop...  this
i want to do - more
help
can you change my heart

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  • Tokyo Sayan
    March 2

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    u know what? today i was going to write a poem similar to this one. very good, glad to see u been writing