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I want to be...

I want to be
under the sea
where the love of joy
and the world of peace

I want to see
kingdom of geese
where you have a choice
and the right to please

I want to say
and laugh and gay
with no realistic
each and everyday

tonight I play
forever stay
with a little music
like the kid today

Author notes

well this is one of my first poem I wrote, I haven't noted for a while untill now so why not added here,PEACEEE!!!

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  • StormyDawn
    February 19

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    Very good. I like how you wrote about wanting to be little kid. Best of luck in the contest, and thanks for entering!