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Weaving Poetically

In snowflakes I whisper joy,

kissing the wind as it encloses you.

 

dreaming of your soul,

I wrap it in laughter

for the days when your sorrow

rains down from angelic eyes...

 

in thoughtless blunders

I bring flowers to your mouth 

selling my heart

for a just a curve of your lips..

 

weaving noble intentions

with candy cane breath

you race to a finish line not there.

 

Instead, 

finding a letter in the clouds;

all night cuddle beneath a moonlit sky

we talk of poetry

as stars sigh blissful euphony,

while in hushed tones

the dandelions revealed a treasure

found in the strength

of your heart, unknown

undiscovered, 

I caress a tear shaped failure

divulging a beautiful mistake

in lips met

 

reaching into the essence of 

moments bliss, I bring forth an offering;

a safe haven found in my arms

singing lullabies to your lonely lips,

my breath freezes upon the movement

of your heart's rhythmic love,

 

as roses paint our cheeks blush,

we tell the night to live forever

and sigh as the world slips

to the dark side of the moon

 

sketching our shadows

 in a sensual tangle,

my lungs inhale your desire

making mountain tops melt

 

 

lost in a dance, reality

falls short of reaching our eyes

as cold air warms our bodies into

a fever that licks dampened skin 

 

 cradling your happiness

between thighs that tremble

we shape snowflakes

and kiss them goodbye as

the sun breaches our haven

of poetic fantasy...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • bigperm
    February 23, 2009

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    catchy title

    really does justice to the form you "weave". Lovely sensations of longing and then... perhaps...regret.


  • maralisa silver member
    February 20, 2009

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    aw wow a very beautiful sensual poem with some wonderful imagery and depth throughout thank you for sharing maralisa


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 20, 2009

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    SO SENSOUS AND BEAUTIFUL!!!

    This is so lovely, passionate, and simple beautiful!!! Just warms ones heart showing how precious a true love can be. 's

  • AngelKat42
    February 20, 2009

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    this is one of your best best poem that you've written.. I see I gots a long way to go.. My twin can write like form poetry and me, I got a long way to go.. you can teach me right

    I love it

    kat


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 19, 2009
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    I See You Like My Scattered Style Too!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 19, 2009

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    ~Sighs~

    Beauty you bestow upon me, where the sun shines of ever-lasting nights of friendship, and hearts filled with dreams, and fantasies dipped in rainbow ecstasy! You taught me of dance, and I shared with you romance, I longed for your wondrous words at first glance, and I'm thankful you have given me a chance to show you my heart of hearts, as well as let me learn of your wondrous angelic soul! Much love, light, laughter~

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Cannonsfire
    February 19, 2009

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    I love this style...its like vignettes and fragments and all of them work on their own and in one Clever sissy C

    • Angelflower
      February 19, 2009
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      whats a vignettes? hope it's a good thing.. Lol.. glad you liked it sissy..


      • Cannonsfire
        February 19, 2009
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        LOL...when you pen a poem in sections labeled I, II, III etc...they stand alone or go together but they are fragmented... C


        • Angelflower
          February 19, 2009
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          oh!!!! pfft, like I knew what the hell I was doing while writing this remember sissy I have no idea what forms are or crap like that lol.. I'm clueless!! lol


  • geckogirl
    February 19, 2009
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    great piece girl

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