Bar the gates, girl!
It's too late
The cold is getting in
The icy draft
With criminal crafy
Has slaughtered all within
There's no way out
They have won
No more night sky moon
Pour the dark into the sun
There's no more day when war is done
It ended much too soon
-Andi
Author notes
This sounds like some kind of macabre nursery rhyme or something....
-Andi
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hummmmmmm interesting for sure, not quite got my finger upon it. creates various thoughts. keep penning.
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WOW
its....err....i can't think of any word to describe it!........extreme scream-worthy!!!!!......um yeah.....i loved it it was short but awesome!!! fantastic is the standard you seem to be uncabable of falling below!!!!!
extremely well done(as always!!!!)
ella
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wow very deep.... i like
keep on writing. great poem. kudos
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