Deafening silences eat away
at my heart...
another day has passed by,
24 more hours of confusion.
Crimson streaks
paint the midnight sky,
as if expressing
the stake forming the
deepened and black
orifices, carving out
a part of me whole.
The blinding darkness
torments the rage
inside of me -
a promise to the razor,
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Author notes
Please just make up your mind right now 
and don't worry if the title doesn't make sense to you......it does for me.
Honest criticisms please!
Comments
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I love ur poem very much it flows very well
1 thing however inturrupt its beauty; thats the last lines
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i dont get that
dont take my comment seriously coz i dont get poetry that much
i am only 14 for gods sake
but i loved this write
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intense and emotional... a very good write...
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i think i understand it lex. and i kinda like it.
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Don't put a period at the end of the poem-just leave it with
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that way they will be lined up.
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