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I Love You

If your stand by my side
I wont scream
If you hold me tight
I wont let go
If you talk to me
I wont breath
If you breath on me
I wont mined

I love when your right by me
And whenI cry at night
Your there on my side
When I want to die
You hold me tightly
When I'm feeling lost
You kiss me

If your not there
You make me feel like you are
Calling me all the time
Sending me little thing
That reminds me of us

I love what you do
How you make me laugh
Or you little smile
That shows every once an in while
Or the habits you have

I love you
And you know it's true
Don't know what to do without you
Please don't forget
Don't ever regret
The feelings we share
Every day

Cause I love you
Like the sky and stars
You are like glue
I stick to you
I just hope you know
I love you

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  • Lucas McDrake
    February 21
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    That was awesome! Keep up the good work!


  • theprotigy999
    February 19

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    nice draft. gota whach that spelling in line 8 and 10 tho. the flows decent but it lacks description. other than that very nice and if u can make a couple corrections itl turn out beautifly