Do you see the blade,
From which so many have died
In the shadows of the night?
The curve that makes
A clean, but gruesome cut.
Or do you see the bones,
That gleam in the moonlight
And stun the victims moves?
Can you hear the rasping voice,
that chills you to the bone
and takes away your breath?
So that you are frozen in place,
With nothing left.
Your time is near.
Your death is near.
Do you see the blade?
No, not anymore.
Author notes
Ranae Schwartz Age:15 Frome: Georgia, US
A contest entry
- Darkness of Death by Maili Knephthan.
1000 points, ended February 23, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
It doesn't matter what you say, i take critism
Comments
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Wow. Morbid, twisted, and dark. GREAT WORK!!! I love it.
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It was very hard to read due to the background. Had to highlight it to read it. Wasn't exactly what i was looking for. What i could read i did enjoy. Thank you for entering the contest. Thanks for sharing.
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xxxkatexxx
u got guts ur going to need that in life...and as for your poetry it was really wicked=)
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