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My Anthem

My Anthem.
Another number, Seen in thunder, hovers by, Hovers by.
Another hour, Seen by showers, Tinkering by, Hour by hour.
Another Day, Supposed Sway, End of the Day, Night.
Darkness Eternal, Feelings forgotten, Wrecking the rotten, Turning again.
Smiles again, Feels the fan, Turning by, turning by.
Feels the Thunder, Feels the Wrath, Feels the Ashen, Glory till death!
Rise again! Rise again! Through sickness! Rise Again!
Rise again! Rise again! Honor With Glory, Glory Till Death!

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  • SwaGGtastic
    February 23
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    Tha SHizzle *HaHa*

    O' i like this one! I read it twice.. it's tha shiznit!


  • TibbySlayer
    February 21
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    Nice Bro.

    Nicely done, Scott Bro. Yet, I like the ending. Cool man. Anyways. Keep it up!

    -♀♂Seth!!