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transformation

I'm holding on so hard, I forgot to breathe
& I know my mistake was believing in you.

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His lips against mine, tasted as sweet
as the sordid words you spat at me
when you turned away & made me crumble.

Because of you, my young hands are dirted
& my youthful heart is blackened.
Now, I hold him close, tell him all those words
that you said to me & I begged you to mean -

I never intended to love him, it happened
& I'm glad my bittersweet battle with you,
turned into something sugary sweet.

Author notes

eh, I was trying to get back at him.
a cruel thing to do, but he made me capeable of it
& in the end, I fell in love with his friend...
a beautiful, loving person & I'm so glad I did.

Midnight-x-Rose

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  • heavenbird gold member
    February 25

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    Aw, this is really beautiful.

    I'm not sure about the "&"'s...

    anywho, thanks for entering and best of luck, this is lovely. <3


  • Sacred Geometry
    February 20
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    amazing!


  • L.Jay
    February 19
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    this was very toouching, i really enjoyed it!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 19

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    well go on with your bad as*

    wonderful piece.

    love
    PP