It was tucked inside
On a slip of paper
It said
I love you
It made me smile
It meant a million words
Because I love you too
So I closed it back up
And slipped into my pocket
Where it will stay
Like a well read book
Only Better
Because it is a message
That means so much more
In a nutshell
A contest entry
- Message in a Nutshell (for children ages 12 and under) by ea.
700 points, ended March 5, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a wonderful message to find in your nutshell - I can see where it would keep you fine company there in your pocket... thank you for this entry!
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Very nice, poetic, and lovely! Even though I'm running in the contest, I hope you win something!
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Thank You,
That is very kind.
Good kuck In the contest as well.
Lorien
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sweet, yes a note with the shortest amount of words summed upto the one who cares as a great love novel wrote just for them
endearing read
abigail
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This is a beautifully written poem Lorien! I think you will do well in the contest!
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