Mouth Over Stuffed
His Dangling Balls Convulse
Gagging On His Thick Spewing Lava
Author notes
I do not claim these pictures used to be my own. Pictures found on google images.
A contest entry
- Can You Make Me Say Damn! by theredcatjazzoflove.
1500 points, ended February 22, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Again, this is short, but powerful and very imagery. It is not the length of a piece of writing, but the power that it holds within to capture the reader, no matter how long or short. You are very creative.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon

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EWWWWIE,,,
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now you know I LOVE this one!
Very in detail, short and to the point.
Beautiful imagery in this sexual dessert for me tonight. Thank you
Nite


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Did I comment on this already? Oh yeah, I did, oh well lol
Wish somebody would gag on mine..... *sigh*


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L.O.L. OK..DAMN!
DAMN, DAMN, DAMN!!! l.o.l. wow you are smoking lady!

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I loved it! As I do all of your writing! Great write!


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WTFH! what tha fucken hell
mrs.roy i just can't do nothing with you i cant your slut side is under arrest dammit i love you to death damn youwild goodness


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HC way to go...very visual, wonderfully erotic.
Best of luck
~sugar~


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Well I must say this is extremly visual and erotic.
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THAT SOUNDS DELICIOUS TO ME! HE! HE!
GOOD LUCK in Ms Lady Enthralling's contest with this juicy piece, Honey! Are you willing to share some of that sweet cream with a naughty pet like me! YUMMY! And where did you get me picture, anyway? LOL!!! At least you kept me privates private, Miss Hot Chocklat!
Peace & Love!
Earl.

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Damn girl, ok I said it for her.


Best wishes in the contest



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Damn girl, short and full of imagery


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Whew
Oh my that is some intense image. Best of luck in the contest.

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Damn is the right word!
A short but, great write here.
I love this background and where
the heck did you get my pic from? lol
Well done and good luck dear!
Jeremy0826


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Certainly makes me say damn!
Short, effective piece.
Good write.
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