the waking world is not for me
so i'll sleep the sorrow away
and hopefully wake up feeling good
for tomorrow is a new day
all these terrible thoughts i keep
locked away inside my head
all slowly begin to drift away
when i lay down for bed
Please tell me what you think
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People are here for you my friend. even unfinished this is still an excelent write. please keep writing , good bad , happy or sad , your poems are the best.
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Sad indeed !
But to the poem it definitely makes one good piece of write
So far I loved it ! But you also said it’s not finished yet, so I’ll be back to see the full version of this poem
After about a long time like 6 months I get to read your new poem, hope everything’s ok with you
Have a nice day
Shuberth
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Moving
Sad but sweet, somehow x
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