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You see me - among December
Falling towards September

You see me - assuming that my pain provided
Ripped open Seams
Among these Dreams

You see me - assuming that the joy provided
Opposed to this Panic
Disposed to this Fear

You see me - assuming that I cannot speak
All Witty and Unwilling
No Assent but all Demur
No straight line to Heaven
No line straight to Hell.

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Just something I submitted into a college magazine

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Comments


  • Tzipora
    June 27
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    yes, an amazing peice

    well done. i liked this write alot.


  • shadows hunter
    February 24
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    wow this is good! It is an amazing pice. Keep writting!