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Angel Flower

Missing image

I,

 

Sink sensual tongue,

in-depths lustful lair.

 

 

          Circular swirls slide,

          as tantalizing lava thickens south.

 

 

Rocky mountains sigh~

 

 

Passion tastes petals blossom,

          upon their full bloom.

 

 

          Liquid love speaks body language,

          more than dreams come true.

 

 

Pretty potions seep imagery,

monumental moments splash~

 

 

          Like a ripple in a pond,

          from a potent pebble.

 

 

Never skipping a heartbeat.

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  • abybaby
    February 23
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    gripping

    nw this is wt i call erotica......gud work mate


  • Angelflower
    February 22

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    oh... you have struck me speechless. this was really beautiful.. You weaved such a lovely image made my heart sigh.. sensual and soft.. beautiful write.. thank you very much for your wonderful entry.. best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 20
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    Very enticing, well written. Enjoyed the read.


  • azlyn gold member
    February 20

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    Just lovely...in word and in form. Delicate and brimming with sensual imagery. Very nice to read.


  • StarEyes
    February 19

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    What a read this one is! WOW! I love it! Love the passion in this! It is amazing! What a great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    February 19

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    Oooh very passionate and sultry, my brother...wow
    Much enjoyed this piece
    Wishing you the very best of all there is or that is yet to be
    Love ya! Sandy


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 19
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    Simply beauiful

    love this


    and you

    Passions


  • Denerica
    February 19

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    A bit of mystery...have me fanning myself here!, You are just so vivid and make it all come to life. Blessings.


  • Introvert2006
    February 19

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    Perfect!

    I'm sure she'll be lovin this!
    Anyone who reads I'm sure will.
    After all, you're the weaver~
    All the best in the contest my friend!


  • poetryrocksmysox
    February 19

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    Wow~

    I love this, and how beautiful the words filled with vivid imageries flow off the tongue while reading aloud! This is hott, and beautifully sensual. What a lovely for the contest! Thanks for sharing, you my poetic sox. Peace.

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