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You Thought..

 You and him are on your way.
 Your love is strong with nothing to say.

 You go to the park,then at sundown the bridge.
 He picks you up,says "I love you." and goes to the ledge.
 He whispers some words,you kiss.
 The next thing you know your falling into the dark abyss.

 

 

 Your life flashes before your eyes.

 You thought you loved him,but he was in disguise.

 

 He didn't love you ,he was just a fake.

 Now look at you,your life is at steak.

 

 

 You look down but see nothing.

 The next thing you know your in a cloud.

 Your families there,but not so proud.

 

 First your happy..but then your sad.

 Then ask if you are dead,they assure you,yes.

 But after all your happy to get off the world

For those STUPID jerks who break more than just your heart.

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  • Wonderful!

    oh this is just like what i feel right now.
    My guy told me after 3 years he doesn't wanna talk to me anymore and called me a liar and a fake.
    This really hit home.
    Even though you're a child you still know how it feels even for us adults.
    Thanks for sharing this.
    -Mandi