Memories of new
meet memories of old.
He’ll understand when he’s a bit older.
For now he innocently plays dad.
Author notes
Prompt: http://marleyvangrinsven.deviantart.com/art/Who-yhe-shoe-fits-111764817
20 words exactly
In a list
A contest entry
- Give me just 20 words by Aussie Gypsy.
700 points, ended February 21, 22 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice job on this one. The poem goes perfectly with the picture. I enjoyed it. Congratulations on the bronze cup.
Mike
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oo! this is impressive... great work.. and fantastic take on the picture/my prompt.
very well penned
thanks for entering,
and best of luck in the contest!!
your judge,
-Lemon Bee-
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Beautiful and what a delightful picture too!
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This is striking, I really enjoyed the feeling that you put into this. Best to you in the contest
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Your write explains the picture perfectly...
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What a wonderfully created twenty words!!! Good luck in the contest sweetie. I love this.
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