She steps to the window
Looking for release.
This life hold no promise,
She found the last piece.
If she could have be heard,
If one word had been said,
She might have never cried,
She wouldn't end up Dead.
Yet, the light from the darkened room
A simple sight of gold
A glimmer in the window,
A new beginning foretold.
Decoded, Trembling for her beloved,
The flightless bird, silent, unloved,
15 steps, in the right direction
If only a sigh, some connection,
Never thought, her eyes on fire,
Preparing for death, the funeral pyre,
And yet,
Without regret,
She steps into the twilight,
Full moon, Catch herself,
These are her musings...
A contest entry
- Twilight-The Safest Time Of Day by SingMeToSleep.
850 points, ended March 3, 2009, 23 entries
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I really like the feel of this poem. The rhyming is soft and unforced, and everything came together in this piece nicely.
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Wow. I loved this! I thought it was beautifully written. Excellent write!
Thank you for entering and good luck! -
niceee, change that window to a cliff in la push n u got a full out twilight poem
excellent write otherwise 
Blessings and Luck
Matt
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This is beautiful. Bella's New Moon adventure, the hurt when Edward left her and the distrust of everything else around her.
I'm sure this will have to go on a favorite list of mine somewhere as I'm absolutely twilight obsessed! -
wow that reminded be of all of the books. but its fairly reminiscent of the book eclipse in my opinion. personally this poem just reminds me of bella.
well anyway i have a twilight poem called la tua cantante maybe you can figure it out
great write by the way
-deadly
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