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For a Moment I Couldn't Move.

i feel you
in every snowflake.
every drop of rain leaks your name
falling to the ground to be forgotten.
a vivid dream where you cry out to me
'we are lost,damned,and forgotten.'

every dead rosebush,
crystalized in snow.
every rainbow fading from the sky.
and i know you're just a click away;
a single sentence could change your manner.

your essence, flowing.
a current between our shores;
a corroded heart placed apon the glass shards
you called hope.

i am lost, damned.
forgotten.

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  • higherlove
    February 19
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    Awsome

    this is very good, i can relate to this poem very much, but in time you will get over it.