Love Goes Where it's Sent....Up a Dogs ass
But in my case it came out of it
Leaving a really bad bad smell
He charmed me and he lied to me
all with innocent eyes
Convinced me he was free as a bird
But then to my surprise
The moment that I fell in love
and enclosed him in my heart
I found he had a wife at home
from whom he'd never part
So I took off for Australia
to put distance in between
It was the only thing to do
he'd shattered my loves dream
What he did was selfish
he stole my tender heart
He said he'd love me forever
that we would never part
But I saw him only recently
he flew over for a spell
and it brought back dreadful
memories of that dreadful
dog poo smell.
And Looking at him after
many years
and thinking of the past
made me realise
any love he'd offered
was definitely up a dog's ass
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Love Goes Where it's Sent....Up a Dogs ass
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Yup, there out there...
and they cost about a dime a dozen.
Thanks for entering.
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LOL I do find this to be so true with my lover. Great job. Shancy.
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Interesting write!
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