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My Model T Town

Lit up like a dashboard at night;
the sky's a windscreen, looking out.
A fog horn calls when it's en route;
the radio plays the waves in tune.
This is my town I'm driving in;
it moves through days and people too.
A view from fifteen miles away
is all it takes to change its face.

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  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 3
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    Awesome write. Great view portrayed.


  • Kiddy
    March 3

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    Very descriptive and it flows very good... it reminds me of Wordsworth's poem 'Lines composed upon Westminster Bridge'...good job there...

    Love and regards
    Kiddy


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    March 1

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    A view from fifteen miles away
    is all it takes to change its face.

    Loved this write as a whole, but loved the last lines the most. I love this! Great write!


  • toomysterious
    February 26
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    Loved the imagery in this one, the sky's a windscreen and fog horns calling. Beautiful.