Life is a merry go round,
full of twists and turns.
sometimes it collapses and fails,
other times it excalates and thrills.
Life will get better for some,
the merry go round will slow down,
and become fun.
For some it will get worse ,
the merry go round will never end,
spinning and twisting,
to no certain beat.
You may feel down,
but it can bring you up.
You may feel good,
and it will knock you down.
Life i a merry go round,
that everyones stuck on,
until death stands it still.
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This poem reminded me of one of my favorite songs!
Great write here!
Do give it a listen and tell me if you like it!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K0fxY_dwpt4
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I agree with this life is a huge merry go round that can sometimes spin out of control thanks for your entry be well.
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