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Seamless



Seamless the dreamer becomes –
less of the world given to days let go…
slower than moving –
worthy of movement…

fuse tongue groove chamber –
this insanity home ownership –
and neither one of us are either
        of the other’s left alone right now…

there’s so much to tell you that you have
not already heard, but you know it by heart
before I have a chance to say,
        “Let this be known…”











© Nublin’s Pub, 2008

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took 'em all out, but still haven't replaced 'em yet...

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  • silverfish
    February 24

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    a little bump key, a turn and we're in. or so it would seem. but i can't tell for sure if i'm on the outisde of a relationship here looking in or the other way around. i do see a poem housing two souls, a mansion prepared with many rooms, that need each other. well done . . . a rare thing these days.

  • tara wilson gold member
    February 19

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    this is so beautiful! i was going to quote the part Mary did, i love it, too. and i love how things can be felt/known within the heart before having to be said...


  • Cat gold member
    February 19

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    there’s so much to tell you that you have
    not already heard, but you know it by heart
    before I have a chance to say,
    “Let this be known…”

    wow...love it


  • Ithica silver member
    February 19

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    They say if you're not moving you're gonna get ran over... But intuition tells me to put my dreams on hold [or morph to some new ones...] because what's the point in moving if it's two steps back... woe be me in the economy!!! [again I interpret from a far left field, but I'm alright now... ] cia