As the sweat glistens and gleams,
I want to hear your screams,
feeling the ache to fill you
I groan with each thrust,
as I pound faster, faster.
I can feel you tense and release,
as I fuck you like a ragged beast,
your nails becoming claws,
shredding skin from my back,
as I pump rougher, rougher.
Switching our positions around,
you get down on the ground,
my finger slides into your ass,
spread wide, I nail you from behind,
as I push deeper, deeper.
My hand now opens your slit,
frantically rubbing your clit,
I sense your cunt start to quiver
when my dick starts to deliver,
as I cum harder, harder.
As you lie there in bliss,
you know I just cannot resist
putting my head between your thighs,
licking your sweet creampie,
as you moan louder, louder.
Author notes
Prompt Chosen: Option 3 -- Phrases/Sentences
8. I like it doggy, so you can do it ruff
Does what it says on the tin, so to speak. No explanation needed.
A contest entry
- Make It Nasty! by hotchocolate.
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Honorable mention
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Tell you something all these writes are making me wet, what a tease for me! Nicely done.
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Glad the words are doing their job.
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oddly amazing
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Thanks.
Oddly?
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i can feel you tense and release,that muscle is a bitch aint it?good erotic write.
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Depends on what you mean by a bitch?
Many thanks.
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Oh wow! Hot write! Great write & greater read lol.
Keep up the great writing! I loved this!
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Thank you kindly.
I tend not to write erotica pieces with as such full-on language as this one. Tend to be more sensual, but the contest demanded it and I was in the mood lol
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Hee Hee This is a great piece here and I sure did enjoy reading this one! Thank you for your entry and good luck
My hand now opens your slit,
frantically rubbing your clit,
I sense your cunt start to quiver
when my dick starts to deliver,
as I cum harder, harder.
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Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it.
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What an interesting poem!
How passionate!
How energetic!
Gal2
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Thank you very kindly.
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