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To be or not to be inspired

"If words be made of breath,
and breath of life,
I have no life to breathe."


And thus my tounge be tangled,
by the beauty of your mouth,
and how it forms around which you speak.
My love you are but a rogue!
Yet you disroot me from my blindness,
and touch a part of my very soul in blithe!
It is for you that I proclaim my thirst,
for no other man hast seen my fairness.




Author notes

Quote by William Shakespear in "Hamlet"
We were in theatre class and I was told to write something that sounded shakespearian. So this is what I came up with. Hope you like it!

If you cant figure out its meaning:

And I cannot find the words to say,
I love everything you say to me.
(basically) Although your a guy and guys mess up,
you made me fall in love with you and touched my heart.
I am telling you my desire
because no one else see's my true beauty.

lol.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • StillLovingYou
    February 19

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    i think it is alot like shakespear if the teacher does not like it them she does not know shkesspear. it is shakesspeary enogh i think very well written