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What She Once Was

Be still me beating heart
Just let me focus in
Everything is a blur
Passing in a hurry
With no where to go
Standing here alone
I know you can see me
Acting as if I'm not real
Your beauteous blue eyes
Pass over me
In a glance
Not like before
When your gaze would linger
Upon your wanted one
You spoke of me so highly
Am I now beneath you?
Have I become what she once was
In this game called life?
Your thick accent slurs with the sound of the world
The last words I hear from you
Wouldn't mean a thing
Because
I have became what she once was 

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  • Emmabug
    February 26
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    have I mentioned how your good at everything? I hate ALL your talents!


  • LadyDeMarco
    February 19

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    Or maybe this is about that other guy that you shouldn't even like, because he's nothing but a jerk... Girl, you need to talk to me!!!

    By the way, this is really good ^.^